Holland Power
WeekThirteen
on monday I woke up feeling very sick which is very disapointing which meant this . week was very unproductive, being in bed all day I had to try my harded to do work,
I contacted Sue and was able to send her an email of a presentation I had mocked up while sick, where I resally wanted any sort of feedback as I was missing out on presentation feedback. Even though I wasnt 100% happy with my renders from last week I had to use them in order to be able to gain some feedback, my computer cant handle renders so I had to wait untill I was well enough to go into studio to do renders
I was able to develop my floor plans further than previously
I asked some of my peers for feedback moving forward their advice was to make the scenes more vibrant and add more detail to the floor plan
Sue was able to give me feedback through email, where her feedback was to edit renders, as currently the look dull and musty,
I agree with this but will have to wait until week 13 until I can go into Studio to do some more renders
REDOING FLOOR PLANS AND SECTIONS
I spent the rest of my week focusing on editing and redoing my floor plans and sections
the floor plans are really important to me as this is what is going to clearly communicate my design, through an index I became happy with the layout of labelling all the spaces wthin the space, detailing each floor
