Holland Power
WeekThirteen
on monday I woke up feeling very sick which is very disapointing which meant this . week was very unproductive, being in bed all day I had to try my harded to do work,
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I contacted Sue and was able to send her an email of a presentation I had mocked up while sick, where I resally wanted any sort of feedback as I was missing out on presentation feedback. Even though I wasnt 100% happy with my renders from last week I had to use them in order to be able to gain some feedback, my computer cant handle renders so I had to wait untill I was well enough to go into studio to do renders
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I was able to develop my floor plans further than previously
I asked some of my peers for feedback moving forward their advice was to make the scenes more vibrant and add more detail to the floor plan
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Sue was able to give me feedback through email, where her feedback was to edit renders, as currently the look dull and musty,
I agree with this but will have to wait until week 13 until I can go into Studio to do some more renders
REDOING FLOOR PLANS AND SECTIONS
I spent the rest of my week focusing on editing and redoing my floor plans and sections
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the floor plans are really important to me as this is what is going to clearly communicate my design, through an index I became happy with the layout of labelling all the spaces wthin the space, detailing each floor
